Q1 Mock Feedback and samples

In general, not too bad on this question.  However, some of you need to get better at structuring your answers.  You should not just state what the article tells you through quoting.  You should make a comment in your own words about what you understand about the issue and then back up through quotation.  Inference in this question was generally better than for Q3.

Here are some successful responses:

Firstly Joe:

 

Secondly, Sophie:

Both of these answers make sufficent points and inferences.  Sophie's is crystal clear (as is Joe's but his handwriting a little more difficult to read!)